episode three

I have turned episode three into Brian. i am waiting to here back from him as he is busy in Georgia. So far there is some more setup in it as well as a plot twist. I am really impressed with how well it is all coming together. considering he was supposed to write most of season one, and i was supposed to write wormholes. Now that we have postponed wormholes i have only been writing the coming kingdom, and am really focused on this new project. he still has the story mostly outlined and im following the out line. well ive got to go now. trying to come up with not so cheesey episode four dialog.